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This is the finally Essay In the “Of Mice and Men” Crooks and Curley's wife were the symbols to show loneliness and disadvantaged groups. Crooks have been on the ranch longer than other workers, Curley's wife was the only woman who live in the ranch, and they were the lowest social position people in the ranch and the society. Those two people reflected all black people and women's situation at the Great depression. When we compared Curley's wife and Crooks we can easily to see how they fight with their destiny and the different endings between them.

First, in the novel Curley's wife and Crooks were different with all other workers, not only because the color of skin and gender ,but also they were totally lonely in this ranch. For Curley’s wife “she had full, rouged lips and wide-spaced eyes, heavily made up. Her finger nail was red. Her hair hung in little rolled clusters, like sausages. She wore a cotton house dress and red mules, on the insteps of which were little bouquets of red ostrich feathers.” Curley’s wife has nice clothes, colorful nail and its can make her looks beautiful but in fact nobody in this ranch can understand and really listening to her. She was not a woman like other people thought; she wants to have some friends in this new place. She didn’t want to isolated by other people. For Crooks “ And he had books, too; a tattered dictionary and mauled copy of the California and a few dirty books on a special shelf over his bunk.” He read many books in his room because he couldn’t do any decided in the ranch, it's same as his whole life. The only thing he can do was after all the works to read book in his own place. He had no chance to play with other workers, even talk with them. His race make his life became a tragedy story. Curley’s wife and Crooks covered themselves and hiding on their own worlds. They both need somebody to be near them and to support them, sometimes just give them a hand for helping. They never said how lonely they felt, but they get sick in their heart because they know how hard to be a normal people. Actually they were more miserable than Lennie because they were not only lonely they also lose respect from anybody.

Secondly, their special symbols make them lose basic freedom and respect from other people. In the whole book nobody called Crooks’s name. People always called him “nigger”. People thought they were different with Crooks. He was a black guy, so he should live in the harness room and bear all the inequality. Black people was poor race then other, it was a clear idea in everybody's mind. Nobody asked for way and even the teaching people also couldn’t explain the reason. When Crooks was a child he has a sweet family and some friends. The true thing was he also have dream and even better than other worker in the ranch. The book doesn’t tell the reason why he loses his family, but in the end he just becomes a loner in the ranch. No family no friend and no dream. He hopes someone can stay with him and he hopes there will be a place he can live with his family and friends. Just like the place in his memory but his dream only can exist in his mind. For Curley's wife she wants to talk to other people not only to her husband. However no one wants to talk with her because she was Curley's wife. All the worker didn’t want have any trouble with Curley because of a woman. She was the only woman in the story and she didn’t have a name in the book, but she was very important to show how the story happened. Because of the color of skin and gender they become loner and for the same reason they were abandoned by the society. Crooks can not sleep with normal worker and Curley’s wife not allowed to talk with people. They lost their basic human right and they almost lost their dream in their heart.

Finally, Curley’s wife and Crooks had their own dreams, but they were different for their dreams. Crooks wants to have a place to live easily. This place can give him love and more help. When he knew George and Lennie’s dream he wants to join in but in the end he gave up and he said this dream can never become true. He realized dream is a dream and how hard a dream can become a real thing. He was a symbol to show some people when they face to fact they give up the things they always admire to do. Curley’s wife was different with Crooks. Before she get married with Curley she have chance to be a movie star. After she married with Curley she still want to tell people she was a special woman. She wants to tell people she’s life should not like that. She didn't want to be a loser for she's life.Curley's wife and Crooks have different experience to fight for their dream but they got same end. It's the truth of the society.

Therefore Crooks was older than Curley’s wife, he was the old viewpoint of dream in The Great depression. Their dream evaporated by the fact, they lost the direction of their life. They were the costar in the book but because of them the emotion of this whole book become deeper and they give much information to explain the story. Crooks and Curley’s wife were the symbols to reflect the loneliness people in the society. People are a type of animal they fight with the bad situation and trying to survive. They can alive because human live together and work together. When some one leaves the society group he or she must dead. Crooks and Curley’s wife they are similar, but they are also different.

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Eva Edit of Meaning:
In the “of mice and men” Crooks and Curley's wife were the symbols to show loneliness and disadvantaged groups. Crooks have been on the ranch longer than other workers, Curley's wife was the only women who live in the ranch, and they were the lowest social position people in the ranch and the society. It’s reflected all black people and women's situation at that time. When we compared Curley's wife and Crooks we can easily see how they fight with their destiny and the different ending between them. You said the two is the same symbols of loneliness and disadvantaged groups, and then you conpared them. I think the contrast is more suitable for them if you really want to find different between them. First, in the novel Curley's wife and Crooks were different with all other workers, it's not only because the color of skin and gender ,but also the main reason makes them special was they were totally lonely in this ranch. For Curley’s wife “she had full, rouged lips and wide-spaced eyes, heavily made up. Her finger nail was red. Her hair hung in little rolled clusters, like sausages. She wore a cotton house dress and red mules, on the insteps of which were little bouquets of red ostrich feathers.” Curley’s wife has nice clothes, colorful nail and its can makes her looks beautiful but in fact nobody can understand and really listening to her. She was not a woman like other people thought; she only wants to have some friends. She didn’t want to isolate by other people. For Crooks “ And he had books, too; a tattered dictionary and mauled copy of the California and a few dirty books on a special shelf over his bunk.” He read many books in his room because he couldn’t do any decided in the ranch, it's same as his life. The only thing he can control after all the works was to read book in his own place. He had no chance to play with other workers, even talk with them. His race makes his life become a tragedy story. Curley’s wife and Crooks covered themselves and hiding on their own world. They need somebody to be near them, and to support them, sometimes just give them a hand for help. They never said how lonely they felt, but they get sick in their heart because they know how hard to be a normal people. Actually they were more miserable than Lennie because they were not only lonely but also never get respect from anybody. The similar is great for them, but you just talk about they are lonely, you don't talk readers the reason of why they are lonely. The actual evidence may help you. That's can approve your point stronger than now, like just tell people they are lonely. Secondly, their special symbols make them lose basic freedom and respect from other people. In the whole book nobody called Crooks’s name. People always called him “nigger”. People thought they were different with Crooks. He was a black guy, so he should live in the harness room and bear all the inequality. Black people was poor race then other, it was a clear idea when everyone was a child. Nobody ask for why and even the teaching people also can not explain the reason. When Crooks was a child he has a sweet family and friends. The true thing was he also have dream and even better than other worker in the ranch. The book didn’t tell the reason why he loses his family, but in the end he just becomes a loner in the ranch. No family no friend and no dream. He hopes someone can stay with him and he hopes there will be a place he can live with his family and friends. Just like the place in his memory but his dream only can be a simple dream in his mind. For Curley's wife she wants to talk to other people not only for her husband. However no one wants to talk with her because of her husband. All the worker didn’t want have any trouble with Curley because of a woman. She was the only woman in the book she even didn’t have a name in the book, but she is very important to how the story happened. Because of the color of skin and gender they become loner and for the same reason they abandon by the society. Crooks can not sleep with normal worker and Curley’s wife not allowed to talk with people. They lose their basic human right and they almost lose their dream in their heart. I think the main words you used iare not very well. Like Freedon and Compared. I think the meaning of the paregraph is great but the main words should change.That' may help readers realize the actual meaning you want to talk about. Finally, Curley’s wife and Crooks have their own dream, but they were different for their dream. Crooks want to have a place to live easily. This place can give him love and more help. When he knew George and Lennie’s dream he wants to join in but in the end he give up and he said this dream can never be come true. He realized dream is a dream and how hard a dream can become a real thing. He was a symbol to show some people when they face to fact they give up the things they always admire to do. Curley’s wife was different with Crooks. Before she get married with Curley she have chance to be a movie star. After she married with Curley she still wants to tell people she was a special woman. She wants to tell people she’s life should not like that. They were different to their dream but they still get same end. The dreaming may describe more exactly, so that you can get more agreement from readers. And you need to find out the actual different between them if you said the "Compare". Crooks was older than Curley’s wife, he is the old viewpoint of dream in The Great depression. Their dream evaporate by the fact, they miss the direction of their life. They were the costar in the book but because of them the emotion of this whole book becomes deeper and they give much information to explain the story. Crooks and Curley’s wife was the symbol to reflect the lioness people in the society. People are a type of animal they fight with the bad situation and trying to survive. They can alive because human live together and work together. When some one leaves the society group he or she must dead. Crooks and Curley’s wife they are similar, but they are still different. You said they are still different at the end but the whole paragraph shows how similar they are. You may change this for one main point. The deep meaning doesn't show in the conclusion at least I think so. You may rewrite the final paragraph. = RIta's Outline: = // Background Information ://During the Great depression, the colour of skin and gender acted as a symbol for a person's social position. //Hook:// //Thesis Statement:// Crooks and Curely's wife was the symbol to show loneliness. Crooks has been on the farm longer than other workers,Curley's wife was the only women in the ranch ,but they have the lowest social position in the ranch .It's told us all the black people and women's situation at that time.When we compared Curley's wife and Crooks we can easily saw how they fight with thrie destinty and the different ending beween them. Evidence: This essay proves this by discussing: 1.Crooks have many books to read but it's only can covered his loneliness.Curley's wife have beautiful face colourful nail and it's same as Crooks,she just wants to ues outside to covered she's loneliness. 2.Crooks was not allowed to go into other workers room .Curley's wife was not allowed to talk with those workers in the ranch.They didn't have basic freedom and respect,because they were in the lowest part of the society. 3.Crooks have a dream but in the end he give up,he didn't choose to work with George and Lennie .He was yield to the word.
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// Topic Sentence: First, in the "of mice and men"Curely's wife and Crooks were different with all other workers,and it's not only because the colour of skin and sexual ,the reason makes them spcial was they were totally lonely in this ranch.// //Point:// Curely's wife and Crooks covered themself. //Evidence://Curely's wife page31,Crooks page69 //Explantion:For Curley's wife c//lothes and nail only can makes her looks beautiful but in fact nobody can understand and really listenting to her.Crooks read books because he have no choose. The only thing he can do after all the work was to read book in his room.He can't play with other workers,even talk with them. //Connection://they never said thet felt alone but they just hiding in thrie own world. //Transition Sentence://Actually they were more miserable than Lennie because they were the lowest people in the society. //Topic Sentence://Secondly, their special symbol makes them lose their basic freedom and respect from other people. //Point// //Evidence://Nobody called Crooks's name and nobody wants to talk with Curely's wife. //Explantion://people thought they were different with Crooks,because he was black.people didn't talk with Curley's wife because of his husband, they didn't want have any trouble with Curley for a woman. //Connection:In the ranch they have no connection with anybody,the condition makes them abandoned by the society.// //Transition Sentence:They were loner but they also have dream in their heart.// //Topic Sentence:finally,they were different when they face to their dream .// //Point:// //Evidence:Crooks never go into other workers room and he said he wants to join to the plain from Lennie and George,but in the end he give up his didn't join them.For Curely's wife when she get married with Curley she give up she's dream to become a super star.// //Explantion:Crooks have his family before he get hurt ,and he hope to have a place he can live with friend and family ,but he still give up to chase his dream because he understand how hard it's could happened.After Curley's wife get married she still wants to told people she was different because she almost can be a super star and shouldn't live like that.// //Connection:Crooks older than Culey's wife they were the two example to show how people face to their dream.Different mentaliey for their dream but they have same end.// //Transition Sentence:They were the costar in the book but because of them the emotion of the whole book become more deeper and help ue learn more things.// //Thesis:Crooks and Curley's wife is the key to help us understand the weak people during the Great depression.//
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__(Jali Edits Meaning)__
In the “of mice and men” Crooks and Curley's wife were the symbols to show loneliness and disadvantaged groups. Crooks have been on the ranch longer than other workers, Curley's wife was the only women who live in the ranch, they were the lowest social position people in the ranch and the society. It’s reflected all black people and women's situation at that time. When we compared Curley's wife and Crooks we can easily to see how they fight with their destiny and the different ending s between them.
 * __(Is the essay topic about how the dream changes people's lifes? But the Introduction paragraph talks about the differences between each other at the Ranch)__**

First, in the novel Curley's wife and Crooks were different with all other workers. it's not only because the color of skin and gender ,but also the main reason makes them special was they were totally lonely in this ranch. For Curley’s wife “she had full, rouged lips and wide-spaced eyes, heavily made up. Her finger nail were red. Her hair hung in little rolled clusters, like sausages. She wore a cotton house dress and red mules, on the insteps of which were little bouquets of red ostrich feathers.” Curley’s wife has nice clothes, colorful nail and its can makes her looks beautiful but in fact nobody can understood and really listening to her. She was not a woman like other people thought; she only wants to have some friends. She didn’t want to isolate by other people. For Crooks“ And he had books, too; a tattered dictionary and mauled copy of the California and a few dirty books on a special shelf over his bunk.” He read many books in his room because he couldn’t do any decided in the ranch, it's same as his (Curly’s) life. The only thing he can control after all the works was to read book in his own place. He had no chance to play with other workers, even talk with them. His race makes his life become a tragedy story. Curley’s wife and Crooks covered <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">themself and hiding on their own world s. They <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">need somebody to be near them, and to support them, sometimes just give them a hand for <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">help ing. They never said how lonely they felt,but they get sick in their heart because they know how hard to be a normal people. Actually they were more miserable than Lennie because they were not only lonely but also never <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">get respect from anybody.
 * __(Clear idea and good connection!)__**

Secondly, their special symbols <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">make them lose basic freedom and <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">respect from other people. In the whole book nobody called Crooks’s name. People always called him “nigger”. People thought they were different with Crooks. He was a black guy, so he should live in the harness room and <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">bear all the inequality. Black people was poor race then other, it was a clear idea when everyone was a child. Nobody <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">ask for why and even the teaching people also can not explan (explain) the reason. When Crooks was a child he <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">have a sweet family and friends. The true thing was he also have dream and even better than other worker in the ranch. The book didn’t <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">told the reason why he lose his family, but in the end he just <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">become a loner in the ranch. No family no friend and no dream. He <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">hopes someone can stay with him and he <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">hopes there <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">will be a place he can live with his family and friends. Just like the place in his memory but his dream only can be a simple dream in his mind. For Curley's wife she <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">wants to talk to other people not only for her husband. However no one <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">wants to talk with her because of her husband. All the worker didn’t want have any trouble with Curley because of a woman. She was the only woman in the book she even didn’t have a name in the book, but she <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">is very important to how the story happened. Because of the color of skin and gender they <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">become loner and for the same reason they <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">abandon by the society. Crooks can not sleep with normal worker and Curley’s wife not allowed to talk with people. They <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">lose their basic human right and they almost <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">lose their dream in their heart.
 * __(The last sentence has connection with the topic, but what's dream did they lost?)__**

Finally, Curley’s wife and Crooks <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">have their own <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">dream, but they were different for their <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">dream. Crooks <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">wants to have a place to live easily. This place can give him love and more help. When he knew George and Lennie’s dream he <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">wants to join in but in the end he <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">give up and he said this dream can never be come true. He realized dream is a dream and how hard a dream can become a real thing. He was a symbol to show some people when they <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">face to fact they give up the things they always admire to do. Curley’s wife was different with Crooks. Before she <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">get married with Curley she have chance to be a movie star. After she married with Curley she still <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">wants to tell people she was a special woman. She <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">wants to tell people she’s life should not like that. They were different to their dream but they still <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">get same end.
 * __(There's no quots to prove your thesis, but the quots are strong evidence to prove the thesie and your idea.)__**

Crooks was older than Curley’s wife, he <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">is the old viewpoint of dream in The Great depression. Their dream <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">evaporate by the fact, they <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">miss the direction of their life. They were the costar in the book but because of them the emotion of this whole book <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">becomes deeper and they <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">give many information to explain the story.Crooks and Curley’s wife <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">was the symbol to reflect the <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">lioness people in the society. People <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">is a type of animal they fight with the bad situation and trying to survive. They can alive because human live together and work together. when some one leave the society group he or she must dead. Crooks and Curley’s wife they <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">are similer ,but they <span style="background: yellow; moz-background-clip: border; moz-background-inline-policy: continuous; moz-background-origin: padding;">are still different. **__(The conclusion is to conclute your essay, but the connection should connect to the society. You just conclute your idea, there's no connection with the society.)__**

= = In the “of mice and men” Crooks and Curley's wife were the symbols to show loneliness and disadvantaged groups. Crooks have been on the ranch longer than other workers, Curley's wife was the only women who live in the ranch, and they were the lowest social position people in the ranch and the society. It’s reflected all black people and women's situation at that time. When we compared Curley's wife and Crooks we can easily see how they fight with their destiny and the different ending between them.

First, in the novel Curley's wife and Crooks were different with all other workers, it's not only because the color of skin and gender ,but also the main reason makes them special was they were totally lonely in this ranch. For Curley’s wife “she had full, rouged lips and wide-spaced eyes, heavily made up. Her finger nail was red. Her hair hung in little rolled clusters, like sausages. She wore a cotton house dress and red mules, on the insteps of which were little bouquets of red ostrich feathers.” Curley’s wife has nice clothes, colorful nail and its can makes her looks beautiful but in fact nobody can understand and really listening to her. She was not a woman like other people thought; she only wants to have some friends. She didn’t want to isolate by other people. For Crooks “ And he had books, too; a tattered dictionary and mauled copy of the California and a few dirty books on a special shelf over his bunk.” He read many books in his room because he couldn’t do any decided in the ranch, it's same as his life. The only thing he can control after all the works was to read book in his own place. He had no chance to play with other workers, even talk with them. His race makes his life become a tragedy story. Curley’s wife and Crooks covered themselves and hiding on their own world. They need somebody to be near them, and to support them, sometimes just give them a hand for help. They never said how lonely they felt, but they get sick in their heart because they know how hard to be a normal people. Actually they were more miserable than Lennie because they were not only lonely but also never get respect from anybody.

Secondly, their special symbols make them lose basic freedom and respect from other people. In the whole book nobody called Crooks’s name. People always called him “nigger”. People thought they were different with Crooks. He was a black guy, so he should live in the harness room and bear all the inequality. Black people was poor race then other, it was a clear idea when everyone was a child. Nobody ask for why and even the teaching people also can not explain the reason. When Crooks was a child he has a sweet family and friends. The true thing was he also have dream and even better than other worker in the ranch. The book didn’t tell the reason why he loses his family, but in the end he just becomes a loner in the ranch. No family no friend and no dream. He hopes someone can stay with him and he hopes there will be a place he can live with his family and friends. Just like the place in his memory but his dream only can be a simple dream in his mind. For Curley's wife she wants to talk to other people not only for her husband. However no one wants to talk with her because of her husband. All the worker didn’t want have any trouble with Curley because of a woman. She was the only woman in the book she even didn’t have a name in the book, but she is very important to how the story happened. Because of the color of skin and gender they become loner and for the same reason they abandon by the society. Crooks can not sleep with normal worker and Curley’s wife not allowed to talk with people. They lose their basic human right and they almost lose their dream in their heart.

Finally, Curley’s wife and Crooks have their own dream, but they were different for their dream. Crooks want to have a place to live easily. This place can give him love and more help. When he knew George and Lennie’s dream he wants to join in but in the end he give up and he said this dream can never be come true. He realized dream is a dream and how hard a dream can become a real thing. He was a symbol to show some people when they face to fact they give up the things they always admire to do. Curley’s wife was different with Crooks. Before she get married with Curley she have chance to be a movie star. After she married with Curley she still wants to tell people she was a special woman. She wants to tell people she’s life should not like that. They were different to their dream but they still get same end.

Crooks was older than Curley’s wife, he is the old viewpoint of dream in The Great depression. Their dream evaporate by the fact, they miss the direction of their life. They were the costar in the book but because of them the emotion of this whole book becomes deeper and they give much information to explain the story. Crooks and Curley’s wife was the symbol to reflect the lioness people in the society. People are a type of animal they fight with the bad situation and trying to survive. They can alive because human live together and work together. When some one leaves the society group he or she must dead. Crooks and Curley’s wife they are similar, but they are still different.